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Monday, March 4, 2013

Writing Sample

This morning we all completed our first Writing Sample for 2013 I have posted it just as I wrote it in the 40 minutes we were given,so the throughout this year I will be able to look back and reflect on the progress I have made in my writing ,I will post my learning goals from this soon.

The day things started disappearing...



Just watching the news  on T.V when the presenter announced that a tragic incident happen. “Some awful news has just come in a comment just land on a house”.”Fire fighter rushed to the seen to put out the fire”.Nobody’s have been found yet police officers and fire-fighters are still searching”.”That is the end of Breaking News goodbye.”

The next day at school Team Five took a trip to where the comment landed.Just looking at the comment gave me shivers there was something strange about it. Everybody rushed to touch it  except me,because I had a feeling that something was going to happen. 

When we got back to school the people that touched the comment started disappearing one by one right in front of the eyes. I panicked I tried to call for help but it was too late they were all gone. 

I got home with tears rolling down my cheeks, I looked around and realise that G.I was a ghost town there was no noise and nobody around.When I got home my Brothers wasn’t there like he usually was and my mum and dad did come home. I laid down on the chair and started crying without realising it I feel a sleep.The next morning I walked to school all by myself feeling lonely and depressed.When I got to class everybody was there and they all said April Fools.

I just remembered that it was April Fools yesterday. "You guys are so mean".Then we all had a cheerful laugh. 




Wednesday, February 20, 2013

Trip To The Moon


5 4 3 2 1 Blast off.The rocket lifted into the sky leaving the earth's orbit and entering SPACE!!.Suddenly there was a comet coming straight into us. Ahhh all the crew  screamed in fear.Just in time the pilot moved us out of the direction of death.Great work pilot Jessica,said captain Serena.

A few hours later in space our detector sensed that there was another spacecraft near us Shrivers creeped down my spine thinking that it might be ALIENS?.The spacecraft kept moving in closer and closer.

Then we started getting lasers fired at us.ALIENS I shrieked out then I drop onto my knees curled into a ball and started. Crying out “ I'm too young to die”(Repeatedly).”That why you always carry guns because you never know what in space”(Pilot Jessica).She turned our spacecraft into the direction of the Aliens spacecraft .Which had pitched black window so we couldn't tell.

We started shooting each other.One of there lasers went through our window and shot captain Serena's arm off.She fell down and screamed in pain. I ran for the emergency First Aid pack chucked it on a bench, then I went to pick Serena up and sat her on the bench.Blood dripping all over the bench.I stitched her arm up and wrapped a bandage to stop the blood.

“You need to have some rest captain”she laid down and took a nap.”How is everything going pilot”.(Me)”not so good we are about to run out of gas and we were nearly to our destination the moon”(Jessica).”Then we just have to get out of this place and make to our destination.Or we’ll be stuck here forever and never be able to refill and make it back to Earth.(Jessica)

“Then we just have to try make it to the moon”.(Jessica)We zoomed past the Aliens ship and just in time before our gas ran out we made a rough landing.Making a quick refill and then lifted into air and started making our way back to earth.The same spacecraft started attacking us again.
But this time it was our  turn  we spun around and started firing and watched there ship burn.We speed past them,then got a fright from a loud boom.We didn't take any chances we kept moving at a high speed to our home planet.We got back rushed out of the spacecraft and warned the everybody about what happened they wouldn't believe us.THE END

This is my story about the trip to the moon you could tell that it wasn’t so great, how was yours?



Tuesday, February 19, 2013

I AM!

This is my presentation that tells you more about me!

My Bio Poem

Alexandria
Energetics,happy,sporty,hard worker.
Daughter of Johnny Evesoni and sister of Kristan and Claude.
Lover of dogs,drawing,video games and family.
Who feels happy when playing,sad when someone past.Also angry when getting into trouble.
Who has been to Brisbane Australia and went to gold coast.
Who needs more sleep to grow taller.
Who fears huge spiders,sharks and scary movies, ghosts most of all.
Who would someday like to see Jesus
Auckland Glen Innes Rowena
Johnny