Tuesday, July 12, 2011

We Need A courtyard Make Over

The paragraph that is in red is the one that my class mate Logan marked.
He gave me a 9 / 12 that is cool that I got a 9 / 12.

Our courtyard needs a make over because, our other play area are crowed when the grass closed in the winter time.

We got really ugly things in our courtyard , like our drain it has mud inside of it and grass growing out of it.Also our drinking fountain it is old and the tap is broken and it is coming out of the wall .I don’t like the drain because that is the most thing that takes up the whole space in the courtyard.So when we give our courtyard a make over, I am going to cover the drain that is more likely a ditch, I really want to cover it with concrete and put a new drain so i am.

No one likes to play in our courtyard because there are no objects there to play with . We have seen kids play in our courtyard sometime , but they will get into trouble by a teacher. So if we re-make our courtyard and turn it into a hard court play area then student can be able to play in our courtyard , instead of getting into trouble by the teacher. Also if we make the courtyard into a play area we can make more space to play in when the fields are closed.

If we can make the courtyard into a better play area, we can try entice kids to come and play in our courtyard.But that can only happen if we give our courtyard a extreme make over.Also if we don’t give it a make over we would lots waste of space in our courtyard . We also need to make more play areas because the fields are closed in the winter time .When the fields are closed the breeze and the big court are really crowed,that make it hard to play games.

This is why we need to redesign our courtyard. Do you think you can help us?

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