Wednesday the 14th Pt England went to watch the Manaiakalani Film Festival.But left at different times, for example the year seven and eights left school during lunch time.So we had lunch at 12:30pm. We were all told that when the bell rang for the lunch eating we had to be at class.To get ready to leave to Sylvia park for Manaiakalani.We hopped in the bus and off we went to our destination Sylvia park.It was quite noise when we all started walking inside the mall.Walking up the stairs making our way into the movies.We sat into our seats and waited for the movie to start.Finally the lights started dimming down.The first movie was Tamaki College (One Direction East side styles). But my Favourite Video was One Direction and The Test.
Kia Ora Alexandria,
ReplyDeleteI hope you enjoyed the film festival, your favourite films were the same as my favourite films.
What you could do next is read your story out allowed to see if it makes sense. Also, focus on one small idea and write about that e.g. the bus ride to sylvia park or the feeling you had when you saw your favourite movies.
Mr. O'Connor