Saturday, November 24, 2012

My Narrative Writing Sample

Pure blue sky with no clouds in site with the suns warm shine on my bare skin. . My family suggested that we  should take a walk in a bush at Otahuhu “ Its going to be boring” my brother kristan said. ”Stay home if you don’t want to come  “ I shouted back”. “Remember to bring an umbrella” I shouted out to my dad.

Speeding down the motorway we got to the bush in no time .”Hurry up and get out “  I told my brother. ”Cool” Looking at the different kinds of trees.30 minutes later I started moaning “ this is taking for ever”.I felt a drop of water slid down my cheek.Out of nowhere it started pouring down we all ran to the umbrella but couldn’t fit.

Then there was a sudden bang we all jumped in fright.” What’s that” I said looking up into the sky there was smoke coming from a tree near us. Suddenly the hole bush went on fire.We all froze in fright we got to our senses and tried to get out of this place.So we tried to run back to the car even if it was to far,but a tree fell right in front of us also it was on fire.Being right close to fire was really sacrey I could hear fickering sounds.Lucklly my mom pulled me back.Even rain couldn’t stop the fire.

Desperate to make it out alive,we tried the other way but my mom and dad made a decision to stop trying.” Just keep going and leave us” we couldn’t just leave out parents .So we cuddled up and waited to be burned or to be saved.

 There was bright light it was shining down on the bush they spotted us.They threw down the ladder and tried telling us to climb the ladder.We couldn’t hear them because or the black smoke but we knew what to do.Climbing the ladder one by one making our way to the top.” Are you guys alright” a rescuer asked us.

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