Writing Sample

This morning we all completed our first Writing Sample for 2013 I have posted it just as I wrote it in the 40 minutes we were given,so the throughout this year I will be able to look back and reflect on the progress I have made in my writing ,I will post my learning goals from this soon.

The day things started disappearing...



Just watching the news  on T.V when the presenter announced that a tragic incident happen. “Some awful news has just come in a comment just land on a house”.”Fire fighter rushed to the seen to put out the fire”.Nobody’s have been found yet police officers and fire-fighters are still searching”.”That is the end of Breaking News goodbye.”

The next day at school Team Five took a trip to where the comment landed.Just looking at the comment gave me shivers there was something strange about it. Everybody rushed to touch it  except me,because I had a feeling that something was going to happen. 

When we got back to school the people that touched the comment started disappearing one by one right in front of the eyes. I panicked I tried to call for help but it was too late they were all gone. 

I got home with tears rolling down my cheeks, I looked around and realise that G.I was a ghost town there was no noise and nobody around.When I got home my Brothers wasn’t there like he usually was and my mum and dad did come home. I laid down on the chair and started crying without realising it I feel a sleep.The next morning I walked to school all by myself feeling lonely and depressed.When I got to class everybody was there and they all said April Fools.

I just remembered that it was April Fools yesterday. "You guys are so mean".Then we all had a cheerful laugh.